No more assignments like this:
You would need to look back the case assignments first to see what was the component of each case for your portfolio and ask yourself, does this material reflect who I am as a teacher or career leader and appropriately present my position in the field? Did you learn anything about yourself when you were working your portfolio? Connect this experience to the question, how the learning outcome in the program contributes to your professional goals.
That last sentence kills me! I cringe every time I read it. Bad grammar really grates on me... as does poor sentence construction. Oh, and poorly chosen words in general.
Words were meant to be wielded masterfully! They thrive, the reader benefits, and the author succeeds at communicating!! I'm a little jealous of the perfectly-selected word or phrase, actually: to be absolutely apropos, fitting the context just-so, finding a meaningful purpose in being useful... now that's an accomplishment.
And I'm a pride-filled overachiever who just ranted a little bit.

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